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:bulletpink:Please check out my gallery and other underwater portraiture!

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:bulletpink:This is a new project I am trying so hard to pull off with a not so good quality underwater case!

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Underwater Gallery

And PLEASE give me feedback and support!




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Hey :)

Underwater portrait looks like always awesome. Because human don't see under water. The treatment of color/saturation is good, maybe i miss a lil bit of personality and force in the color. And i miss emotion on the model face. And i don't understand the use of the cup. Except this i like texture grain. And the serenity of the picture. Maybe you can try to make the model playin' with emotion.

ps: Not so important but you cut our her hand. And it's an important member which can help to show emotion.

Hope this help.
Sorry for my bad english. Hahaha. :)

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Heya Beth, nice shot there i'm really too lazy right now to give more of a comment though. Chatter with you sometime i shall. Bye.

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NIKON CORPORATION
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Sep 4, 2009, 11:33:49 PM

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